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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="25" height="20" alt=":wave:" title="Hi!"/> here for the critic request <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Love the stock used!


VISION,IMPACT,ORIGINALITY:
Again i see many works like this, but this is the first time i see this model, love her and the pose. The way of add the BG and model are perfect in the perspective and color match.
great choices <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="40" height="15" alt=":handshake:" title="Handshake"/>


TECHNIQUE:
A hot dark angel, can´t say more <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" title="Love"/>
Love how you worked with my wings, excelent perspective and shadows.
Her pose fits the BG perfect cause you see the shot was from below and not for a normal front standing person.
The colors choosed are very calm but dark. Good mood for me.
Now the construction..
The necklace hanging from the wing needs more shadows, in the whole image it doesnt fit the place for me but still more shadows would look good.
I see also a blue drop in the wing where the necklace is, dont know if that is my display or is part of the work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="18" height="15" alt=":confused:" title="Confused"/>
A blur background would also add depth and a focal point direct to the main subject.
Maybe play more with the hair strands and add a casted shadow from her to the floor-plants on my right.

Overall great work, love the resources choosed, great use of the wings perspective and shadows <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug"/>
Keep it coming! And for the watchers, try to come up with your own original works, dont steal or copy the works you see, improve, inovate and share with love <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="29" height="28" alt=":dalove:" title="I love deviantART!"/>

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